Thursday, October 31, 2013

The Apocalypse

The sky had turned a bright, bloody red. I could hear screams coming from outside my windows, but I was too afraid to look. All I could do was sit there, hoping and praying that the evil things wouldn’t find me. Suddenly, everything was quite. “What happened? Is it finally over?” I thought to myself. I got up and slowly walked to the door. Something didn’t seem right, I could feel it in my stomach. When I opened the door I saw a dark shadow crouching over my mothers lifeless body. I could feel my face getting hot and tears streaming down my face. “Oh my God, whats happening?” I wispered to myself. The dark shadow heard me, stood up and turned to look at me with piercing evil red eyes. Suddenly, it charged after me and I squeezed my eyes shut ready for it to tear my flesh. Nothing happened. I opened my eyes expecting to see the “thing” standing right infront of me, but all I saw was darkness. “It was only a dream.” I sighed with relief. TO BE CONTINUED

2 comments:

  1. I really like the tone you set and how you're leaving so much mystery about the piece. MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!!! :)

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  2. I liked how suspenseful this piece was. Even though it was short, a lot happened and I didn't get bored with it.

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